Sorry all my comments are so short, but at least I'm all caught up!

You already know how much I like the way you write "Stephen", but you can add Stephen and the two Jon's to that as well. I did think it was kinda mean of Jon to 'out' "Stephen", but I doubt Jon would understand how hurtful that would be for him. Of course, Jon sees him as a two-demensional jerk with no feelings. Oh, how wrong he is--about the feelings part.=)

Man, I adore this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!