Ahh, it's always good to see a new chapter of this... They've already been mentioned, but the lines "You know what's weird?" replied Stephen. "In my world, it is." and "You are not my Jon," he hissed. "I can trust my Jon." (Ow) are really great, and the characterization continues to be very interesting.


(Read and enjoyed the last chapter too, btw, just didn't have anything particularly clever to comment with because it was a brilliant chapter that deserved more than just "yay, good chapter!")