wakwaha.livejournal.com ([identity profile] wakwaha.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ptahrrific 2007-09-22 05:32 am (UTC)

It was said with sheer, raw, emotional honesty, and Jon could feel his heart melting.

Aww! Report-'verse-Jon is so sweet. I love how he's completely disarmed by Stephen's unexpected niceness. It seems like he's going to fall so hard for Stephen.

Jon -- his nice, mild, gentle Jon! -- matched it.

Nice to see how much more dominant and assertive real-Jon is. Should be interesting to see how this plays out. I really like how you're exploring the differences between the two Jons, and I hope this comes up more in further chapters. As far as I know there haven't really been any fics comparing character!Jon with actual Jon, and there is definitely a difference between the two.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ^_^

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