i absolutely love this verse, though it's a shock to see jon walking out on stephen like that. i guess i'm too used to fanon where jon put up with almost everything stephen does. it just another thing that makes me adore this verse, the way you make everything work and pay attention to everything, from the main character differences down to the tiny details that make the au magical. i can't wait to read the next part!

the two are going to end up together, right? 'cause i just saw you wrote "jon, "stephen"" in the pairing category, and not jon/"stephen". now you've got me worried.