The first bit is extremely intriguing! Are the men crumbling? The worlds? Has a rift opened that will destroy the universe if they don't do something about it?? (And it reminds me a bit of the webcomic GPF, do you read that?)
Oooh, what would Stephen say if he knew Jon was trying to brush "Stephen" off? Would he act the same as Jon? Or would suddenly seeing his counterpart in that state shock him into the compassion that's come more gradually in the other world? (I kind of want to see Stephen and "Stephen" come face to face now.)
I just love Jon putting himself into Stephen's role as improviser (I have a serious kink on for this kind of role reversal, and I wish there was more of it in every fandom)! And the structure there, Allison and Eric conversing as a background to Jon thinking really, really hard, and cutting off when Jon finally opens his mouth - perfect. And oh, poor "Stephen". I want to see how this meeting will go!
I'm not sure I can say much about Stephen's introspection, other than yes, I see! (And I'm *REALLY* looking forward to all the interviews this week, omg.)
Aww, "Jon." I love that he reassured Stephen before he went into the studio, even though he could probably use the comfort even more at that point. ♥!
.. you know, I noticed rereading this that you use "brush it off" rather a lot, and then I realized - feathers. You are devious! :D
(One more chapter to catch up - I don't think I'll get my comment for it written before TDS comes on! D: )
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Oooh, what would Stephen say if he knew Jon was trying to brush "Stephen" off? Would he act the same as Jon? Or would suddenly seeing his counterpart in that state shock him into the compassion that's come more gradually in the other world? (I kind of want to see Stephen and "Stephen" come face to face now.)
I just love Jon putting himself into Stephen's role as improviser (I have a serious kink on for this kind of role reversal, and I wish there was more of it in every fandom)! And the structure there, Allison and Eric conversing as a background to Jon thinking really, really hard, and cutting off when Jon finally opens his mouth - perfect. And oh, poor "Stephen". I want to see how this meeting will go!
I'm not sure I can say much about Stephen's introspection, other than yes, I see! (And I'm *REALLY* looking forward to all the interviews this week, omg.)
Aww, "Jon." I love that he reassured Stephen before he went into the studio, even though he could probably use the comfort even more at that point. ♥!
.. you know, I noticed rereading this that you use "brush it off" rather a lot, and then I realized - feathers. You are devious! :D
(One more chapter to catch up - I don't think I'll get my comment for it written before TDS comes on! D: )