ext_2460 ([identity profile] f-real.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ptahrrific 2007-11-19 10:59 pm (UTC)

*snickers* That last chapter hurt. I'm glad you decided to end this one in a goofy way.

You're good at drawing Hodgman. That's an adorable pic :) and I loved the line about D.Javerbaum ordering interns to carry his slippers. I've mentioned it before, but I really do admire the level of detail you managed to incorporate into the story, and not just the timing of the tosses and so on, which provides you with a solid structure to build the plot around - there's an awfully large cast here, and I enjoy their cameos very much - Hodgman and his hanky, Javerbaum and his slippers, and the "old-fashioned tea set nicked from Oliver's quarters", which made me laugh out loud - every self-respecting Englishman (or woman!) should have a decent tea-pot. And I just caught that you used 'nicked' and started giggling again...

Poor Jon and his colds! (And that, children, is why you shouldn't smoke.)

(An aside: I want a copy of the Ismael Beah book. Do we know anything about how they choose guests for the show? I find myself curious.)

I am highly entertained by the fact that he asks Jason if he's ever really upset Sam - not 'someone', not 'anyone', but his wife - oh Jon, you truly are clueless. Loved Jon's shock at Stephen being willing to compromise; loved Stephen's delight at Jon's response.

And "Because you'd get weird looks if you wore the collar in public." just cracked me up.

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