I actually read this last night right before bed and was not nearly coherent enough to comment. I'll attempt to write something halfway decent now, at least.
I knew that Jon needed peaches, but I definitely didn't guess that that was why the Doctor had that preset to begin with. After this chapter Ten's behavior made so much sense, though. I actually hadn't spotted a lot of the paradoxes so I'm glad you spelled so many of them out in this chapter. They were all very well done. :)
And then. AND THEN. STEPHEN IS MR. STEWART!! You should have seen me when I read that, I definitely uttered a muffled shriek or two. I knew he and Jon were partners, but I'd assumed that Stephen was meeting future!Jon and that was part of why he's so drawn to him when- I was going to say when they first meet, but it's impossible to say when their first meeting really was, isn't it? *laughs* The fact that it was STEPHEN, though? YOU WIN EVERYTHING. \o/
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I actually read this last night right before bed and was not nearly coherent enough to comment. I'll attempt to write something halfway decent now, at least.
I knew that Jon needed peaches, but I definitely didn't guess that that was why the Doctor had that preset to begin with. After this chapter Ten's behavior made so much sense, though. I actually hadn't spotted a lot of the paradoxes so I'm glad you spelled so many of them out in this chapter. They were all very well done. :)
And then. AND THEN. STEPHEN IS MR. STEWART!! You should have seen me when I read that, I definitely uttered a muffled shriek or two. I knew he and Jon were partners, but I'd assumed that Stephen was meeting future!Jon and that was part of why he's so drawn to him when- I was going to say when they first meet, but it's impossible to say when their first meeting really was, isn't it? *laughs* The fact that it was STEPHEN, though? YOU WIN EVERYTHING. \o/
I can't wait to read the Christmas special!