ext_23715 ([identity profile] ellisbelle.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ptahrrific 2008-11-24 02:15 am (UTC)

Hey, I’m sure those squishy blue rabbits were just misunderstood—cinnamon allergy sufferers unite!

I started laughing madly at the first line of this story and couldn’t stop until well after I’d finished it.

Well, actually I started laughing when I read the text of the lj cut—"Ne-ga-tive, Mis-tress. This u-nit is not e-quipped with fin-gers"—because that could just go to so many wrong, yet amusing, places.

There are so many clever, hysterical details throughout: Facebook pawns Myspace yet again and Maria’s random status updates; and if the internet is for porn, why wouldn’t Mr. Smith be as well?; K-9’s bath; the image of Sarah Jane Smith playing Guitar Hero.

The last scene is gorgeous and perfectly them.

“Smoothing a damp lock of hair out of her face, Sarah Jane murmured in her ear, "Does that answer your question?"

Hot, hot, hot.

“her curiosity had been thoroughly satisfied”

Well done, Sarah Jane.

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