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Some kind of saviour ([personal profile] kribban) wrote in [personal profile] ptahrrific 2013-09-08 11:37 am (UTC)

Nice flow in this chapter.

I'm sad that they forgot their prizes and Dory.

"Uh-huh. So he really is...?" Anthony waved his hands in what was probably meant to be a demonstratively swishy way.

"Has the soul of a beautiful fairy princess," said Jon.


I wonder if Jon's masculinity does not come into question because he's bisexual. Or just because he's interested in traditional guy things.

"Anthony," said Jon. "There's no 'them'. It's just us."

:D

Their bucket was approaching the far end of the skyride; only two more posts stood between them and the dropoff, with Killer waiting at the gate and what looked like a couple of uniformed officers holding back a few dozen fans.

Killer is smart. Although wouldn't Jon's mom's adress be public knowledge?

"Oh, fine," said Jon. "Just wallowing in the knowledge that I will never...." ...be normal again. "...get to go back there."

Jon should know celebrity will fade in a few years. Also, he could wear disguises.

"Well, it's always good to try new things," said his mother. Like it was no bigger a deal than, say, trying Korean food for the first time.

Maybe Jon's mom thinks he's going through a phase. She probably doesn't take their teenage romance seriously.

I hope she's nice to Stephen, although I have a bad feeling about it. :/

And they're not going to need condoms! Unless Stephen is raped and gets an STI ;_;

Very nice of Olivia to take care of Stephen's dog while he's away.

"Have you tried sneaking out to a bar with her and getting plastered together?" asked Stephen. "That's what got me and Steve to bond when nothing else could."

So bb!Stephen and bb!Steve found a bar that was willing to serve two fifteen year olds booze?

Yes, he approved the statement they'd drafted.

What kind of scandal was it? I don't get it.

There were unfamiliar fluttery things going on in Stephen's chest.

bb!Stephen is so adorable! ^^

But why isn't he letting Jon see him?

Maybe there was somewhere else waiting for him. Somewhere he'd like to live, where he'd fit in and be comfortable even the way he was now.

Nice romancing on NYC. I hope this future isn't too far away.


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