Yay, you finally wrote a Jon-has-a-harem story! And not a contemporary consensual polyamourus while at work situation, but a real harem, where they live with him (and are presumably contracted?)
The entire team draped with gauze? Over their naked skin?
I would pay to see that. ;D
And the image of a Olivia - dressed like that - kneeling at Jon's feet, pretending to be subservient = very sexy.
She trusts him — heck, even Sam trusts him, and she's been here since before Jon made his turnaround — but that doesn't mean it doesn't grate.
Oooh! So much delicious backstory here. Was Olivia forced to go into service? When did Jon stop coercing his concubines into sex? Why did Sam begin to trust him? So much angst!
Kristen's hands caress her bare arms; Olivia wraps them around Kristen's ample waist and kisses her deeply.
This whole scene was HOT! Kristen sure can put on a show.
Olivia and Kristen get a round of applause. Jessica hugs them both. Jason goes for the same, a sly leer on his face; Sam gently yanks him back.
"And I wasn't kidding about you getting my room tonight," Jon adds. When the joy in the room vanishes behind wary shields, he hastens to add, "Not with me in it! No, of course not. I'll be in one of the guest rooms. With, uh, I don't know if anyone wants to call tonight, but I was hoping...."
The dynamics here are interesting. Sam and Jason are obviously a couple and have some degree of monogamy. Everyone, including Jon, takes for granted that he has no right to sleep with Kristin and Olivia, and he's passively waiting for someone to step up and claim him for the night.
I don't get why Olivia wants him to sleep in the Concubine wing? And why she assumes he and Stephen will only cuddle? :)
"Then I guess you better keep us all happy enough not to spread it around, huh?"
Jon's gaze skips around the circle, face to face to face. Then he rubs the back of his neck. "I guess I better."
This shifting of power is interesting. Outside of the home, Jon has the upper-hand, legally and socially, but his concubines hold increasing power over him behind closed doors.
Uhm, write more? If nothing else, I hope some delicious fanart comes out of this universe! :D
Re: Ten Olivia/Kristen AUs (6-10)
The entire team draped with gauze? Over their naked skin?
I would pay to see that. ;D
And the image of a Olivia - dressed like that - kneeling at Jon's feet, pretending to be subservient = very sexy.
She trusts him — heck, even Sam trusts him, and she's been here since before Jon made his turnaround — but that doesn't mean it doesn't grate.
Oooh! So much delicious backstory here. Was Olivia forced to go into service? When did Jon stop coercing his concubines into sex? Why did Sam begin to trust him? So much angst!
Kristen's hands caress her bare arms; Olivia wraps them around Kristen's ample waist and kisses her deeply.
This whole scene was HOT! Kristen sure can put on a show.
Olivia and Kristen get a round of applause. Jessica hugs them both. Jason goes for the same, a sly leer on his face; Sam gently yanks him back.
"And I wasn't kidding about you getting my room tonight," Jon adds. When the joy in the room vanishes behind wary shields, he hastens to add, "Not with me in it! No, of course not. I'll be in one of the guest rooms. With, uh, I don't know if anyone wants to call tonight, but I was hoping...."
The dynamics here are interesting. Sam and Jason are obviously a couple and have some degree of monogamy. Everyone, including Jon, takes for granted that he has no right to sleep with Kristin and Olivia, and he's passively waiting for someone to step up and claim him for the night.
I don't get why Olivia wants him to sleep in the Concubine wing? And why she assumes he and Stephen will only cuddle? :)
"Then I guess you better keep us all happy enough not to spread it around, huh?"
Jon's gaze skips around the circle, face to face to face. Then he rubs the back of his neck. "I guess I better."
This shifting of power is interesting. Outside of the home, Jon has the upper-hand, legally and socially, but his concubines hold increasing power over him behind closed doors.
Uhm, write more? If nothing else, I hope some delicious fanart comes out of this universe! :D