1) I have read this a truly ridiculous amount of times since it was posted. Ridiculous. But I can't help it! It's so soft and cuddly and loving, like the off-brand snuggie Jon gets wrapped in. :3
2) My favorite sections are definitely 1 and 4 because homg, so hot and tender and careful and so, so much love. Though 2 is lulzy as hell and 3 is pretty cute, too.
3) Re: the title, I see what you did there. Also, I'm sort of in love with the fact that they use the stoplight system, because, yes. That's so Jon. Keeping it simple. Idk. :3 It's perfect.
4) Jon's eyes pop open. The look in them unnerves Stephen, which is silly, right? He shouldn't go trusting his own gut over another person's words. At least, until Jon laughs, "Oh my god, you thought that was a scene."
I LOLed IRL. But ngh, Stephen teaching Jon how to bottom! *_* hot hot hot. And this part was so lovely: Stephen can relax enough to enjoy playing shepherd, to reassure him through the pain and delight in the way he moans and flinches and chews on his lip before he makes it out to starry-eyed pleasure. Pretty words. *_*
5) forced femme. in a sensible pantsuit. bury me in my family's plot becuase i. am. dead. Oh, Stephen. :3 You cutie.
His boyfriend relaxes a little, cuddling against him. "I thought it would look good on you when I bought it," he confesses. "In retrospect, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned that to Lorraine."
even deader.
6) the scratches so faint Jon hardly realized they were there until Stephen started tracing them like fine calligraphy
More pretty words! :D *_* I love everything about this scene. All the little details: the berry tea, Stephen's clothes, Jon's snuggie. And then the sweet cuddling at the end. It's beautiful. ♥_♥
7) "And then," breathes Stephen, "I am going to spank you for every last one."
Stephen's whole deal here was cute as can be, especially "Please respect my right to speak." But this line! Yeah, Stephen! That's how you do it! :D
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2) My favorite sections are definitely 1 and 4 because homg, so hot and tender and careful and so, so much love. Though 2 is lulzy as hell and 3 is pretty cute, too.
3) Re: the title, I see what you did there. Also, I'm sort of in love with the fact that they use the stoplight system, because, yes. That's so Jon. Keeping it simple. Idk. :3 It's perfect.
4) Jon's eyes pop open. The look in them unnerves Stephen, which is silly, right? He shouldn't go trusting his own gut over another person's words. At least, until Jon laughs, "Oh my god, you thought that was a scene."
I LOLed IRL. But ngh, Stephen teaching Jon how to bottom! *_* hot hot hot. And this part was so lovely: Stephen can relax enough to enjoy playing shepherd, to reassure him through the pain and delight in the way he moans and flinches and chews on his lip before he makes it out to starry-eyed pleasure. Pretty words. *_*
5) forced femme. in a sensible pantsuit. bury me in my family's plot becuase i. am. dead. Oh, Stephen. :3 You cutie.
His boyfriend relaxes a little, cuddling against him. "I thought it would look good on you when I bought it," he confesses. "In retrospect, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned that to Lorraine."
even deader.
6) the scratches so faint Jon hardly realized they were there until Stephen started tracing them like fine calligraphy
More pretty words! :D *_* I love everything about this scene. All the little details: the berry tea, Stephen's clothes, Jon's snuggie. And then the sweet cuddling at the end. It's beautiful. ♥_♥
7) "And then," breathes Stephen, "I am going to spank you for every last one."
Stephen's whole deal here was cute as can be, especially "Please respect my right to speak." But this line! Yeah, Stephen! That's how you do it! :D