Ouch! You broke something that feels like my heart. I sat stunned for a moment when Stephen and Jon's link was severed.
I think I see what you're aiming for here (a Stephen who could return as a full person who isn't making decisions based on someone else's desires). If Stephen was going to go on the Report, I guess it's for the best that they aren't tied together.
All I can wonder is what he will be like when he comes home if he's already so affected that he's able to shield his emotions from Jon. I know I should be happy for him and what he can become now but a part of me mourns for what he was and can never be again (selfish, I know).
I kind of feel like I'm twelve and just finished Gone With the Wind and had no idea that it was going to end like that.
Looking forward to the epilogue.
I know if you sequel this it will be more like Rhett Butler's People than Scarlett:)
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I think I see what you're aiming for here (a Stephen who could return as a full person who isn't making decisions based on someone else's desires). If Stephen was going to go on the Report, I guess it's for the best that they aren't tied together.
All I can wonder is what he will be like when he comes home if he's already so affected that he's able to shield his emotions from Jon. I know I should be happy for him and what he can become now but a part of me mourns for what he was and can never be again (selfish, I know).
I kind of feel like I'm twelve and just finished Gone With the Wind and had no idea that it was going to end like that.
Looking forward to the epilogue.
I know if you sequel this it will be more like Rhett Butler's People than Scarlett:)