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Some kind of saviour ([personal profile] kribban) wrote in [personal profile] ptahrrific 2011-11-29 11:13 am (UTC)

Dun dun dun dun!!

Preggo!Olivia!

I forgot to say, the picture of Kristen and Olivia in bikinis in last chapter was very cute.

Tad calling Amy an "air bunny" Awwww :-)

Why is Stephen writing his freudian slips in his journal? Does he really want sex with Tad and Amy? And is that the secret he wants to keep from Jon?

I like how Jon can use their bond to add meanings to words.

He had barely drawn breath when Stephen cringed (this, at least, heartbreakingly easy to read). "I'm sorry, sir. I'm sorry. I'll pick it up. Please...."

Is he reverting to using 'sir' to mean master instead of knight?

Next chapter soon, please!


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