Oh, this is just wonderful! I love the way you portrayed them - ugh, that gut wrenching feeling I got whenever I had to feel bad for Homura, just like in the show...! And I have to admit that my eyes teared a little when Madoka said Mami's name. :') Love it!

And I had to mention the MLP reference, too! :P Somehow, having on her shirt a character that starts off shy and passive but ends up becoming badass when she wants to seems very fitting for Homu Homu...! n.n