I'd never even heard of "Zanna, Don't!" before this, but I read the story anyway and really enjoyed it. I wasn't expecting the twist there at the end, but it was definitely interesting. I was wondering when you'd be posting something new, so I'm glad to see this. :)

You didn't close an italics tag correctly, by the way- a large part of the last part of the story is all italicized.

(Oh, by the way, I did read all of "State of Grace" and loved it, but I slacked off with reviewing there at the end. I'm sorry.)