ext_47402 ([identity profile] fireflower314.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ptahrrific 2008-04-03 03:15 am (UTC)

I'd never even heard of "Zanna, Don't!" before this, but I read the story anyway and really enjoyed it. I wasn't expecting the twist there at the end, but it was definitely interesting. I was wondering when you'd be posting something new, so I'm glad to see this. :)

You didn't close an italics tag correctly, by the way- a large part of the last part of the story is all italicized.

(Oh, by the way, I did read all of "State of Grace" and loved it, but I slacked off with reviewing there at the end. I'm sorry.)

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